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To Capture the Ocean

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I love forest floors but you need rugged shores
Wait - I'll stay on a sailboat and bottle the ocean
No longer shall you long - for shingles on the sand
In hand you will grasp them - in tiny attention
And care - the high tides cannot understand
Your mind like I do - so look out from land.
To wait for the creak of the dying ship,
Bowed below the force of words,
Cracking from the sonorous script-
With which I writ and which I worked
To Neptune's dark and stop-start heart
That swells with the lower weighty winds
And sinks with lunar pass.
The source of all this trouble?
A vessel in the hull
With several sheafs of paper in
A Poet's useless seal
A thousand words for liquid,
To quell your coastal lust
Still sinister the skeleton ships
That split on rocks to rust.


I'll fall down from the rotted deck,
Stumbling in the foam,
Here it is, (the captured sea)-
Now will you come home?
Submitted to :iconthewrittenrevolution:

I was unsure about even uploading this and I wonder whether the plot and intended meaning is clear?
Ideally every line should be transparent and deep - I am writing about the sea after all.

The intention was to portray a man chasing after proverbial golden fleece (bottling the essence of the ocean in poetry) for his lover while disdaining the waves he so dislikes.

~Al-Is-In-Chains got it: The meaning I get from this is the willingness of oneself to be anything for the one they love, when one's meaning to oneself has become utterly insignificant.
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CapriceSilvea's avatar
This is an amazing piece!