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Eden

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A haven then, set in a hill
With two trees bare and unashamed.
One bore life while one could fill
A cup with thickly flowing thought
And drive the couple cursed and blamed,
From Eden or the parking lot.
Ok so this is two stories...

One is about the start of Genesis, the other is about sex in a carpark.

I suppose the poem is supposed to provoke thought about the morals surrounding sexuality...
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savvycoon's avatar
Very nice work! I love how you incorporated the two stories! I have officially fallen in love with your poetry! XD lol.