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UPDATE: CONTEST [link]

In anthologies this poem is usually preceded by an extract from T.S. Eliot's Journey of the Magi (which is pretty awesome itself)

Anyway, you can read the full text here: [link] , though I wouldn't recommend reading anything else on The Guardian. Also this early version is different to the one I have typed out...

I thought I'd feature some of my favourite parts though :]

The poem is about a charred Iraqi insurgent in a burnt out car. (Yes, my home territory.) - [I write war poetry, I'm not Iraqi.] The whole thing is a dialogue between the reporting war-poet and the corpse. The end of the poem concerns the news spreading that American Marines have been freezing their sperm in case they are killed. I have typed an abridged shorter version made of my favourite parts.

Tony Harrison A Cold Coming(abridged)

according to Sophocles ie
'the best of fates is not to be'

a philosophy that's maybe bleak
for any but an ancient Greek

but difficult these days to escape
when spoken to by such a shape.

When you see men brought to such states
who wouldn't want that "best of fates"

He heard my thoughts and stopped the spool:
"I never thought life futile, fool!

Though all Hell began to drop
I never wanted life to stop.

I was filled with such a yearning
to stay in life as I was burning,

such a longing to be beside
my wife in bed before I died,

and, most, to have engendered there
a child untouched by war's despair.

So press RECORD! I want to reach
the warring nations with my speech.

Lie that you saw me and I smiled
to see the soldier hug his child.

Lie and pretend that I excuse
my bombing by B52s,

pretend I pardon and forgive
that they still do and I don't live,

pretend they have the burnt man's blessing
and then, maybe, I'm spared confessing

that only fire burnt out the shame
of things I'd done in Saddam's name,

the deaths, the torture and the plunder
the black clouds all of us are under.

Say that I'm smiling and excuse
the Scuds we launched against the Jews.

Pretend I've got the imagination
to see the world beyond one nation.

Rainbows seven shades of black
curved from Kuwait back to Iraq,

and instead of gold the frozen crock's
crammed with Mankind on the rocks,

the congealed genie who won't thaw
until the World renounces War,

cold spunk meticulously jarred
never to be charrer or the charred,

a bottled Bethlehem of this come-
curdling Cruise/Scud-cursed millennium.

I went. I pressed REWIND and PLAY
and I heard the charred man say:
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